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Twenty-Eight

14th Feb 2020, 9:30 PM in Act Six/Seven: Awakenings
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BlueDragon 14th Feb 2020, 9:30 PM edit delete
BlueDragon
OMG! This is so late DX But it's done! I'm okay with at least the composition of this page. I inked it twice. I am contemplating checking out a "G" nib or some other size to see if I like it better. I like the "sanji" nib, but I think it'd be nice to have a variety of tips XD

Blah blah boring technical talk XD

No time, no video.
But thank you all for your patience!

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MadJak91 16th Feb 2020, 1:36 PM edit delete reply
MadJak91
I remember when their first failed attempt was mostly played for laughs :/
Big K's gambit. But I do hope they can later realize why their bro died in the first place. Admittedly it is good to be reminded because both the name and looks evoked female to me all the time, lmao.
BlueDragon 16th Feb 2020, 5:57 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Oh, you're right: the chick with the lips is a woman. Her younger twin brother is just yelling out "brother" Full Metal Alchemist style, instead of "Rensha." XD

It does look like he's calling her brother, though. I think I'll just have them share a speech bubble when I get to editing this for print (because...let's face it, I have a ton of editing to do XD)

Yeah, I realized when I started this, things were very light hearted. I still want to have elements of that, since it can't be heavy all the time, but when I started re-doing old pages, I took that into account.


You're far enough along, I imagine you probably won't see those pages, but as early as Act 3 of the revamp, someone passes (and we see more dead bodies, since I show Odysseus' arrival to Oregon.)

I am getting ready to edit those pages and fix poorly drawn/composed panels XD I got a lot of feedback from a variety of sources, so I'm ready to edit those.
MadJak91 19th Feb 2020, 1:17 PM edit delete reply
MadJak91
I think I mistook her bro for a girl when they first appeared. Figured they are all girls. Now did the reverse with the other member, lmao. But ya, it is hopefully clear now, haha! Thanks.
BlueDragon 19th Feb 2020, 1:44 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Ha ha ha! That's okay.

When my partner edits the revamp, he never gets Odysseus' gender right XD

Then I remind him of Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru XD
BitterBadger 18th May 2020, 2:19 PM edit delete reply
BitterBadger
No, it was Keisumi's doing! KEISUMI!! Gah, can never get through to a family member who's in a blind rage :-(
BlueDragon 18th May 2020, 3:04 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Nope :*(