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Forty-Five

17th Apr 2019, 7:00 PM in Act Five
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BlueDragon 17th Apr 2019, 7:00 PM edit delete
BlueDragon
"You're all wet!" Something, something, or other to sound like a golden age western comic.






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MadJak91 19th Apr 2019, 11:11 AM edit delete reply
MadJak91
How long before this is really resolved by another fight but between each other?
Because this kind of changed into a friendly kid's fight by the pool where kid A splashed kid B and somebody scratches their knee at most, lmao.
I think I mentioned I like their uniforms so being splashed kinda sucks... :(
Pretty boy haircuts usually survive.
BlueDragon 19th Apr 2019, 1:00 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
In two pages the sh*t hits the fan. ;)

If I was posting twice a week, this would be moving along quicker. Once we move, I'm thinking of upping the posting schedule...but I need to finish with flipping Acts 1-2 before I can get the that. I've also got some people who are helping me with edits, so they may have some suggestions once I get to this point in the flip. I want to improve the pacing, so I'll definitely address that with them when the time comes :D


When I get to flipping Act 5, I'll think about how to make the scene more intense, but Rin's not very useful right now, since it's her first time using her powers (Shimiko needs to teach her how to do it.) I don't want to fall into the trap of over powering her...Hm...I'll have to do some research and see what I can do to improve the pacing :)


I guess my main problem is I'm trying to show that Rin doesn't have too much control over her powers, and Rensha doesn't want to hurt Rin or Kanna if he doesn't have to (he's actually on their side, but has been spying for the "good guys." Kei has them in her employ, but they think they've got one over on her, as "double agents." They may be wrong in that assumption ;)
MadJak91 21st Apr 2019, 11:42 AM edit delete reply
MadJak91
I actually understood that but ya, with battles and one update there is so much you can show. That is fine though. Do what works best for you :>

It is not like some anime where it stops after some fight and then tells you to read the novels. No. Eff you!
lmao
BlueDragon 23rd Apr 2019, 11:48 AM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
XD True true XD