The battle between unlikely heroes and demonic forces begins. <<Left to Right (except where noted)>>


16th Jun 2008, 1:00 AM in Act One: Broken Wing
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BlueDragon 20th Sep 2018, 12:40 PM edit delete reply

Old message still a bit relevant? Keeping it, I guess.


Revamp posted! I am very happy this fix. I cut a ton of unnecessary text, and instead of using ballpoint ink for the ropey/hairy background in the last panel, I actually carefully used a different nib! Whoo hoo for using the professional nibs!

Per the suggestion of a reader, I also tried to make sure Kanna and Rhina's faces were more pronounced from each other. I tried to make sure Rin's lashes were her exaggerated points, and Kanna's were softer, more rounded lashes. I hope these changes helped!

BitterBadger 12th Mar 2020, 1:34 PM edit delete reply
Wouldn't hurt to have a few more time-scrolls for safe keeping. Just in case things don't work out in this timeline ;)