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Fifteen

16th Jun 2008, 1:00 AM in Act One
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BlueDragon 20th Sep 2018, 12:40 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
9-19-18

Revamp posted! I am very happy this fix. I cut a ton of unnecessary text, and instead of using ballpoint ink for the ropey/hairy background in the last panel, I actually carefully used a different nib! Whoo hoo for using the professional nibs!

Per the suggestion of a reader, I also tried to make sure Kanna and Rhina's faces were more pronounced from each other. I tried to make sure Rin's lashes were her exaggerated points, and Kanna's were softer, more rounded lashes. I hope these changes helped!

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